Book Review - I Wish I Were A Shark - Dan Jackson

Title:  I Wish I Were a Shark

Author:  Dan Jackson

Review:  Well the book is OK - there are a few grammatical problems - some picture problems - some tense problems and well enough that I did not enjoy reading it to my children - maybe they would enjoy it better without me commenting on all the issues this book had.  I think with some more editing this could be a great book for kids to read and enjoy - I have a hard time overlooking errors in writing because reading should be easy and fun and errors make it pause and slow down in the flow of the story - I hate that -

I think that kids that read this without a parent may like it more - a few editing and Boom this would be a great book.

Pages:  19
Kindle Ebook

Description:  Meet a Dolphin who wants to be a Shark 
This is Johnny. Johnny is a dolphin. He is 6 years old, some people would call him a small dolphin. 
But Johnny doesn't want to be a dolphin. He would prefer to be a SHARK. 
He wants to have all the advantages that SHARKS have. 
So, let’s join him on his dream.

Author Information:
My name is Dan Jackson, 42 Years old from Ontario, Canada.

I have two amazing boys and a dog.

I have been writing for long long time ago and my specialty is children books.

I own a blog (landofchildrenbooks) and most of my books are published at amazon under Dan Jackson.

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